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CommentsDude, your work never ceases to amaze me.... Wonderful job!
-- Sing as if no one is listening, Dance as if no one is watching, Live every moment as if it was the last... REally great.
-- For my friend, simply Crios. Sorry for bad english, but i'm italian My site (whit many section) -> [link] Great pic!
Hey there! I'm from The-Order-of-Artists....
I really like the atmosphere on this one. Just to give it a bit more creepy feel, you might consider adding a touch of mist. It'll also help with atmospheric perspective on the dock. There are a lot of details here that I like (the ripples at his foot, the one lantern that's out). The girl has a few anatomical issues, particularly, her torso looks a little too long. Her hair is very dynamic though. Fish-man is amazing, especially the design of his head! The only suggestion I'd make for him is on his texture. As it is he looks to have the same texture as human skin. To make him look shinier and wetter make the highlights sharper and smaller; you want to have a sudden contrast between dark and light. -- Just because you're paranoid doesn't mean there isn't an invisible deamon out to eat your face. We put the FUN in FUNerals! I know what you mean about the torso but I got to such a point in rendering there was really nothing I could do about it at that point. I really did think about adding some fog but at the same time fog is usually in mornings and this is more at night. I was trying to go for that wetter look but for some reason I just couldn't get it going the way I wanted.
Thanks for the well done critique, you hit a lot of good points but kept it constructive at the same time which makes me look forward to the future of our club. I hope to look that most of the charter members will get to the same point so that future members will have good examples. -- Not getting constructive critiques? Want to learn how to give better critiques? Then consider joining The Order of the Artists [link] a critique club focused on art education. Hmm. my comment doesn't seem NEARLY as helpful as the above one since all I'm saying is that it's an awesome painting and it looks exactly like I imagined those horrible innsmouth fish men aside from a bit less squelchy. All I can really say is good work, I'm clearly not good enough at art to be able to notice as much stuff as the person above <3
-- This has and always will be a source of great amusement for me -- Free pr0n?!!!!1138 Well 626elemental is part of the Club "The Order of Artists"
Thanks for the complement though -- Not getting constructive critiques? Want to learn how to give better critiques? Then consider joining The Order of the Artists [link] a critique club focused on art education. So creepy
-- ...in the cookie jar. =kazumitsu: "I know the internet has to have an art project where someone collected poop and poored glitter on it." ~draak-shadow: "Yeah, it's called Edward Cullen." Hello from The-Order-of-Artists....
Great atmosphere and idea but all of the colors are very muddy. A lot of browns, greys and blacks flatten and mud the piece out. I think the fish man is the strongest object in this piece, I would give him a hint of scales or some sort of texture to what his skin is like. Keep painting -- ~ Justice |
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